Friday, September 25, 2009

Sketch

"Hello Rose," was probably the best two words I had ever heard in my whole life. Maybe, it was because it came out of his mouth, his sweet, deep, rythmic voice saying my name, it sounded like a symphony. I was so shocked, stunned really, I couldn't even speak. "Rose?" he asked with a puzzled grin on his angel like face.

"Oh hello! Hello Ricky! " I spitted out, oh yeah Rosie, nice going, your a genious, you just got spit all over his face, I thought to myself. I just wish I could of said it without giving him a second shower. "I'm so sorry about that." My face was turning a deep red.

"Oh its fine, it happens to all of us." He smiled and patted my back, "So how are you?"

"Gggood. You?" I couldn't breath anymore, he just touched me, ME!

He began to tell me all about his day so far, or maybe it was about his football practice, or maybe it was about his Science project, to tell the truth, I really had no idea, I wasn't really listening, I just couldn't pull my eyes away from his face.

He was truly perfect in everyway. He was the most known guy in our whole school, but he was also so modest about himself. It amazed me how down to earth he was, I mean his life was truly perfect. He was the quarterback of our school football team, not to mention the best player, he took our team to state 2 years in a row, and everyone knew that he would do it again for his senior year. He was also the most gorgeous person currently living on this planet, probably even in this universe. Everyone loved him, including me. He was truly an amazing person.

I just couldn't concentrate on what he was saying, I was in a complete trance. His gorgeous blue eyes just glistened from the light hanging from the hallway ceiling, like a pond of crystal clear blue water. He always tilted his head slightly whenever he talked to someone, and tends to want to be close to your face. His tan skin, it was too marvelous to describe, it was so smooth, yet it seemed so fragile and fresh, like porcelain. His smile just brightened the whole room when he walked in, the whiteness of his teeth was just magical. Like they almost sparkle, like little crystals of hottness, you could say that he was my own little Edward Cullen. :) You couldn't help but just smile whenever you saw him. His hair, was a chocolate brown, so welcoming and creamy, it looked so warm and comfortable, I just wanted to take a nap in it! And I don't even know how to begin talking about his bod! Oh my gosh, I swear it was carved by an angel, it was a masterpeice. Like one of the statue greek gods, perfectly sculped.

Whenever I looked at him though, it made me so excited, of course! But also, sadness just would fill my heart, because, he was just too perfect. And when I say too perfect, too perfect for me, like why would he ever take an interest at me? Like, every single time I saw him smile, my heart would break, just like someone had punched me in my gut, I didn't even hold a candle to the rest of the girls in my school.

All of these things were just running through my mind! But all in all, he was perfect, he was truly my true love, my prince charming, and its been that way since the first time a saw him in 4th grade.

I guess I had been standing there for a long time, just staring at his face. Oh my gosh, I think drool had actually been running down my face! I guess thats why everyone walking by were just bursting out laughing. Oh well, really, who cares? I was almost under a spell, I literally couldn't stop staring at him. All of a sudden, I felt a warm, sculpted, tan, and muscular arm wrap around me. "Rose? Rosie? You there cutie? " he laughed as he softly shook me.

"Yes yes, I'm sorry about that. " I stammered.

" Anyways, would you like to? "

"Liked to what?"

"Come to my game, and then I wanted to take you to dinner afterwards, just you and me." He bit his lip, looking worried, "you don't have to if you don't want to."

I didn't understand, "Me? Really?"

"Yes you," he said as he leaned over and kissed my cheek.

My heart stopped, sparks were flying in my stomach, "yes! yes! I 'd love to!"

" Awesome, I'll see you tonight then." he whispered in my ear as he walked away.

"Ok, " I said as I closed my eyes and rubbed my cheek. Finally, my dreams had come true. ;)

1 comment:

  1. Watch out for spelling, some grammatical issues and such, like spelling and capitalization. And the smileys.

    That said, I really feel like i could be seeing this scene playing out. It seemed pretty realistic.

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