John: "By the way, your paying."
Kasey: "Ummm, ok." (looks puzzled)
John: "Ya...so... so look really pretty tonight, I like your dress."
Kasey: "Thank you! You looked like quite a.. "
John: " A stud? Yeah I know, anyways, sorry for spilling punch all over you at the dance."
Kasey: "Its no big deal, my dress was just white, now its pink."
John: "Its hot."
Kasey: "Okay...thanks."
John: " Did you have a good time at Homecoming with me?"
Kasey: "Yes, it was great!"
John: "Oh I know, its just because you were with me."
Kasey: "Sure."
John: "Oh you don't need to be modest about it, you were with the hottest guy there, it probably made you seem actually a little hot."
Kasey: "Yes, because that's all I really wanted." (Rolling her eyes)
John: "Oh, I know!"
Kasey: "Oh crap, I don't have any money with me."
John: "Well what kind of date are you?"
Kasey: "Excuse me?"
John: "Okay smart one, how...do we pay... if you don't have money? "
Kasey: "The guy that takes the girl out actually has money! Duhhh!"
John: "Lets go!"
Kasey: "What?! We can't, we haven't paid!"
John: "Shut up and hurry! We have to go before any of the workers notice!"
Kasey: "I'm not stealing."
John: "Lets just go!"
Kasey: "Let go of my arm!" (they run out the front doors)
John: "Yes! That was a close one! Tell me where you live again."
Kasey: "It's fine, I'll walk myself."
John: "Okay, lets get the kiss in then."
Kasey: "Get off of me!" (she slaps him and begins to walk away)
John: "Fine, jerk."
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Holy wow! That was intense! I really liked this, seriously! He was a total stuck up guy and his ego is bigger than the state of Texas! good job!
ReplyDeleteNorma Jean
The guy was so totally stuck on him self. I think there needed to be more risk involved in what was going on.
ReplyDeletehaha very intense. I really liked this, that guy was super lame to
ReplyDeleteGood. You painted this guy as a total jerk- Good job. You could've taken it further, though. Like, maybe have him hit on the waitress, or notice another girl in the coffee shop. He's bad, but you could've made him worse.
ReplyDeleteI love the idea that he just assumes that she's paying. I wonder if it would've been more effective if he didn't reveal that until later when she says she doesn't have any money. Then he's like, WHAT?!? Then who's supposed to pay? He's oblivious.
i think this is a really good idea and its done really well, that guy was a joke of life. haha. good stuff.
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