Wednesday, October 28, 2009

The Poem about Love

Do I know what love is?
Peace, security, selflessness, passion?
Could it be that all of these are true?
That when I look into your eyes, I see your spirit, your soul,
That I am entranced by your gaze, the sparkle and electricity that entices my soul,
That when I look at you, I see a life in the future that includes both of us,
A ring on both of our left hands, that attaches us forever,
Picturing us growing together, older and older,
Always having the fire inside,
It never dying,
Always wanting,
You ask me, isn't that a while away?
Yes, but just looking into your eyes makes me know that it can be real,
A love so pure, that inside, I know its meant to be.

4 comments:

  1. that is very good.
    its cute.
    its sweet.
    its great.

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  2. Isn't that a while away?

    I love that line. Talking about marriage and forever when you're still in high school. Some people only want to live in the moment. Some are already thinking of the future.

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  3. Wow! If that's what love feels like count me in!

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  4. Very Good! I liked at the beginning how you used discribing words of love!

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